Monday, January 11, 2016

Discussion: A SERIES OF UNFORTUNATE EVENTS // Book 13 and Wrap-Up

Note: Over the past four Mondays, I’ve discussed the first twelve books of A SERIES OF UNFORTUNATE EVENTS (the links are here, here, here and here). Today I’ll be talking about the final book in the series. 

Warning: This will be a VERY SPOILERY discussion of A SERIES OF UNFORTUNATE EVENTS. VERY SPOILERY. 



At last we come to the close—the moment we’ve all been waiting for…or something dramatic like that. So, let’s talk about THE END. 


The Ambiguity. I think more than any other book in the series, THE END has taken a lot of heat. Dissatisfied people slam it for being a lazy, depressing, inconclusive conclusion. Admittedly, Lemony Snicket does not choose to answer all the questions that have arisen throughout the course of the series, and he certainly leaves a lot of mysteries unsolved. So I understand that if you’re coming into the final installment hoping for answers, you’re going to be disappointed. But I think those who insult Lemony Snicket on this count are the ones missing the point. Because, you see, Mr. Snicket did all of this on purpose. Which means it’s up to us to figure out why. 

As I have mentioned before, the Baudelaires have been through an enormous amount of trauma, and they have faced so much during their short life that they have, quite frankly, forgotten what it means to be safe and secure. They are tired, and Count Olaf has been breathing down their necks for ages. And you have to remember that time seems to pass more slowly for younger people than it does for adults, and that everything that happens when you are young will have much more of an impact on your psyche than it would when you are older. So, in other words, what they have experienced is significant. 

In the end, when Count Olaf dies, the children find themselves suddenly released from their torment. Sure, they will have to worry about their damaged reputations, when and if they do reach land after leaving the island where they ended up marooned for a year. They will have to find jobs and buy homes and make friends and all that fun stuff. Regardless, the main source of their continued trauma has ceased to exist. But that doesn’t mean they’re immediately going to be okay. 

A lot of people seem to have been hoping for an ending where everything gets tied up neatly and happily. But let me tell you something. You can’t endure that much prolonged suffering without sustaining damage. It doesn’t work that way. Yes, Count Olaf will no longer be able to go out and actively cause the children new hurt. But that doesn’t mean what he’s done will suddenly be undone by his passing. If only it would work that way in life—then most of our troubles wouldn’t exist. Unfortunately, the Baudelaire parents will remain dead. The children will still bear the weight of trusting their guardians and protectors, only to be failed time and time again. They will still walk around, every day, knowing no one cared enough to make a difference. And they will still suffer the guilt of all the bad things they themselves have done—both intentionally and unintentionally. None of that will go away now that Olaf is gone. 

So slapping on a happy ending according to popular terms would be dishonest. And if there’s anything we’ve learned from how these books relate to children is that Mr. Snicket is far from dishonest. As much as it might not sit well with us, the ending Lemony Snicket gives to his characters is the happiest ending that he could, in all honesty, write for them. Yes, the Baudelaire children are strong, and knowing their track record, it seems that they will make it, that they will do well. I believe they will continue to survive and thrive because that is who they are—because what they have already gone through should have broken them, but it didn’t. But to pretend that it won’t take time for them to be happy again is to write a lesser story for the sake of warm fuzzies. And I, for one, am glad Lemony Snicket did not do that. 

True, he could have tacked on an epilogue showing the children old and content. But would that even fit with the tone of the series? I think not. Personally, I believe an add-on like that would also feel dishonest because it would have to ignore, almost completely, the years, maybe even decades, it would take for the children to move on. I much prefer the ending the way it is—stating the truth and pretending nothing. 

What about all the unanswered questions, Liz? Isn’t it sloppy writing to introduce all that mystery and then leave the readers hanging? 

In most cases, it probably would be the mark of a writer who got in over their head. But keep in mind that Lemony Snicket himself is just a character in A SERIES OF UNFORTUNATE EVENTS. While he knows more about the Baudelaires’ story than even they do, he is still piecing together what he has found through extensive research after the fact. He is by no means omniscient. So to give us all the answers would be to break from the entire mold of the series—to break character—and I’m glad he didn’t do that. In order to give the readers what they really wanted, Lemony Snicket (I should really say Daniel Handler) would have had to sacrifice the entire point of the ending (or, at least, the point as I perceive it) which is: It’s important to know that we rarely get all the answers we feel we need in life. 

The Main Villain. Okay, now that we’ve taken care of that, let’s talk about the main villain in the story—the biggest bad guy. Who do you think that would be? 

Is it Count Olaf? Many of you will probably agree that he is the main villain, and you wouldn’t necessarily be wrong in assuming that. I mean, Count Olaf is definitely the main antagonist. He is the one who actively and continually introduces the children to trauma. He is the one who does his level best to hurt the children. 

But I would contend here (and you’re free to disagree with me) that Count Olaf is not the main bad guy. Instead, I would say that Mr. Poe is. Let me explain. Count Olaf is like a dog eating unattended meat—he sees something he wants and he just goes after it like it’s instinct, like he doesn’t know any better. He has chosen to be evil, no question about it. So I would argue that Mr. Poe is worse because Mr. Poe is supposed to be the good guy—he does know better—but he still chooses to do all the wrong things. 

Mr. Poe is supposed to protect the children. He says he will protect them, and maybe on some level he really does believe he’ll do his job. But not only does he fail, he doesn’t even try. Instead, he blames the children for their misfortunes, treats them like they’re responsible for losing each and every home they come to, and acts as though it is their fault that Count Olaf is after them. Later on when the newspapers are spreading lies about the children, Mr. Poe buys into those false reports without even hearing the children’s side of the story. And despite the evidence of his own eyes, he blames the Baudelaires for the death of Dewey Denouement. Through it all, Mr. Poe, the guy who is supposed to be their savior, is the one who always condemns them and always lets them down. Nobody expects Count Olaf to behave, but because they do expect Mr. Poe to be the good guy, his wrongdoings cause more damage in the end. 

The Libraries. Beyond the literary references and the often humorous explanations for more difficult vocabulary words, Snicket features a library of sorts in every book. 

In the BAD BEGINNING, the children find escape and legal help in Justice Strauss’s library. 

In THE REPTILE ROOM, the children find life-saving information in Uncle Monty’s herpetological library. 


In THE WIDE WINDOW Klaus uses Aunt Josephine’s grammatical library to decipher an important note.

In THE MISERABLE MILL, Violet discovers relevant information on hypnosis (just in the nick of time) using the mill’s library. 

In THE AUSTERE ACADEMY, Violet, Klaus, Sunny and the triplets research ways to make their lives more comfortable using the academy’s library. 

In THE ERSATZ ELEVATOR the children use Esme’s library in an effort to save the Quagmire triplets. 

In THE VILE VILLAGE, the children learn about mechanics from Hector’s secret library in order to fix the hot air balloon that is supposed to be their salvation. 

In THE HOSTILE HOSPITAL the children discover information in the hospital’s library of records about the possibility that one of their parents might still be alive. 

In THE CARNIVOROUS CARNIVAL, the children find the location of the second-to-last V.F.D. safe place in Madam LuLu’s archival library. 

In THE SLIPPERY SLOPE Klaus uses the ruined V.F.D. library to decipher an important code. 

In THE GRIM GROTTO Violet and Klaus use Fiona’s mycological library to save Sunny’s life. 

In THE HOTEL DENOUEMENT, the hotel IS a library, so to speak, but more importantly, there is also Dewey’s secret library which temporarily represents hope, freedom, and answers for the children. 

And finally, in THE END, the children find solitude and salvation in Ishmael’s secret library. 

Each library is tied to some sort of positive emotion, whether hope or safety or comfort or anything in-between. But the Baudelaires’ experiences with libraries as the series progresses also tracks their emotional growth and change. Despite their initial suffering, the library is a safe place with all the answers they need. However, as the story continues and they endure more and more, libraries remain wonderful places, but they no longer offer all the solutions to life. That’s one of the sadder parts of growing up. When we are younger, the world seems simpler and safer, something that can be solved by a story or two. But when we grow older, we gradually realize that the world is far more complicated than we could have ever dreamed, and that even though we can escape it and work to make it better, we cannot fix it—not completely. Stories will always be wonderful, and they will always have great impact, but they will never be the full solution. 

In Conclusion. A SERIES OF UNFORTUNATE EVENTS is long and dark and humorous, yes, but it is deep as well. Throughout this five-part series, I have tried to show you just how deep it really is, and as much as I have highlighted, I still feel I have only scratched the surface. Maybe one day, in a year or two, I will revisit the series and try again. But in the meantime, I ask you (please, and thank you) to tell everyone about it—to read it and have your kids read it (if you have kids), to recommend it to your grandparents, your siblings, your friends, your pet hamster and any one else you’d like. I ask you not to get scared away by the darkness in it so you miss out on what Lemony Snicket is saying. I ask you to think deeply. More than anything, this world needs people who think deeply. 



Well, that’s it, little coffee beans. Now it’s time for me to get back to reviewing other stories. But I’d love to know what you think of A SERIES OF UNFORTUNATE EVENTS. Do you agree/disagree with my thoughts? What are some deep aspects you’ve noticed in the story that I neglected to mention? What are your favorite parts? Have you read any of Lemony Snicket’s other books?

Friday, January 8, 2016

Beautiful People #14 // Writerly Resolutions and Goals

Note: So yeah, at least for the time being, I’m going to start posting on Fridays now, as well as on Mondays and Wednesdays. It’s possible I won’t be able to do this consistently, but we’ll see how it goes. At least for now, Friday will be a random post day—anything from tags, to discussions, to book reviews, to whatever my Vulcan heart desires. Also, just so you know, this is my 100th post! Here, have some virtual coffee. (Also, I apologize for formatting strangeness--I just got a new computer and a new word processor, and I'm still working some of the kinks out.)



For those of you who aren't familiar with this link-up, Beautiful People is hosted by Cait @ Paper Fury and Sky @ Further Up and Further In. (You should definitely check out their blogs.) Last month I participated in Beautiful Books #3, and you can find the link to that here



What were your writing achievements last year? 


Last year was somewhat less productive for me than the year before. I started editing in January with high hopes of making good progress. Among my assorted rough drafts from NaNoWriMo 2015, I had written a trilogy, and I had worked up an editing timeline which I had hoped would help me completely polish that trilogy in a year and a half. (Yes, go ahead and laugh. It’s very funny. Ha ha.) But then snow happened. A LOT of snow. For a long while, the snowbanks at the ends of our wrap-around driveway were taller than me, and I’m no hobbit. This all meant I had to do a great deal of shoveling, and one of the side effects of intensive shoveling, for those of you who don’t have snow where you live, is exhaustion. So it was rather difficult to make editing headway during the winter, and starting out behind threw me off kilter for the rest of the year. That’s not to say it wasn’t a good year, I just didn’t feel as on top of my game as I did in 2014. That being said, I did manage to bring the first book in my trilogy to what I hope will be the next to last major draft. Yay me.



Tell us about your top priority writing project for this year? 


I’ve actually shared some snippets from my current project with you before (the links are here and here). Essentially, it’s a young adult fantasy with dragons and murder and revenge and other fun dark stuff. The main character has a hard time differentiating between acting out of love and acting out of selfishness, to put it mildly, which is probably my favorite type of person to write. I’m hoping to have that book ready to query by April at the latest. But I’m willing to take as much time as I need to get it right. 

After that, it’s a bit of a toss-up. I want to tackle my NaNoWriMo 2015 time travel novel, but I want to try editing two projects at once, to see if that’s something I can manage, so I’m going to need to pick another draft from Rough Draft Mountain (also known as my hard drive). And I hope to edit at least one more novel later on in the year, if I can possibly pull that off. *internal screaming* I’m leaning on targeting one of my historical novels set in the time of the first European Black Death outbreak, but I haven’t decided on what I’ll edit after that. Maybe I’ll draw straws, or stage a Rough Draft Hunger Games, or maybe I’ll have you vote. We’ll see. *twirls pen*



List 5 areas you’d like to work the hardest to improve this year. 


Um, obviously nothing because I am a perfect writer. 

Ahem. 

Just kidding. 

I definitely want to get better at the organizational side of things—I want to get more efficient so I can get more done. I have a lot of books I need to edit and a lot more that I really really want to write, so if I’m going to have my cake and eat it too, I need to step up the pace. 

I want to cut down on meaningless procrastination. I’m all for taking breaks from writing, but I don’t think it’s super helpful when my time off is unproductive and undisciplined. Facebook sucks my mental energy—so does Twitter. But, after writing something challenging or emotional, my tendency is to scroll mindlessly through my newsfeed so I don’t have to think. But I would rather spend that time researching or reading or painting or doing some other meaningful task. 

I want to convey emotion better in my writing. A couple of my beta readers have pointed out that my current main character acts out her emotions, but she doesn’t really seem to feel them. Granted, my goal for her is to communicate the way people reeling from trauma sometimes can’t feel very much at all and they just act out how they think they’re supposed to feel. But if I’m not getting the point across, I’m not getting the point across, and I need to address that. 

I want to improve the endings to my novels. I’ve never been hugely confident with them, and I want to work at making them snappier and more dramatic. Since I’m a panster, and I figure out my story as I go along, everything tends to fizzle out at the close. Which means, now that I’ve learned how to fly the plane, I need to learn how to land it. 

And finally, I want to improve my writing overall. While it’s important to focus on areas where my writing is weaker, that’s not hugely helpful when I forget to work on everything as a whole. So I want to make sure that no part of my craft gets neglected in favor of another. 



Are you participating in any writing challenges? 


Not currently. I will, however, participate in NaNoWriMo come November. I probably won’t do either of the Camp NaNoWriMos, mainly because I already have a boatload of rough drafts and I really should spend that time editing since I know I’m going to try to write 800,000 words in November. 



What’s your critique partner/beta reader situation like and do you have plans to expand this year? 


Right now, my system isn’t anything special. I just finish a draft, share it with random people I trust, and twiddle my thumbs until I get feedback. Then I edit and repeat. So I’ll be doing that again this year. 



Do you have plans to read any writer-related books this year? Or are there specific books you want to read for research? 


Currently, I don’t have any major plans. Last Christmas, my mom bought me a copy of LETTERS & LIFE by Bret Lott, and it’s about writing. I haven’t read it yet, but I really want to, so I’ll make sure to tackle that one this year. As for research, I don’t have any books in mind at the moment. 



Pick one character you want to get to know better, and how are you going to achieve this?


I want to get to know November (Ember—from my time travel novel) better because I find her rather interesting. She has this tiny bit of hope, and she’s letting it destroy her, and I want to explore her potential further. As for figuring out characters, I do that best as I work with them and put them in difficult situations. I’m not one for doing character charts and diagrams and whatnot. To me, those sorts of things are like tutorials for complicated software. I get bored and distracted so I skip them and poke around until I’ve figured out what I need to know. In other words, I learn by doing. 



Do you plan to edit or query, and what’s your plan of attack? 


I do plan to edit, and I do plan to query. My plan of attack can be summed up in one word: 

COFFEE



Toni Morrison once said, “If there’s a book that you want to read, but it hasn’t been written yet, then you must write it.” What are the books that you want to see more of, and what “holes” do you think need filling in the literary world? 


Every book I write is something that I would have loved to have found on the shelves, so I guess you could say that those are the holes I perceive in the literary world, and I’m doing my best to fill them. 



What do you hope to have achieved by the end of 2016?


By the end of 2016, I hope to have finished editing my current work in progress and started querying agents for it. I hope to have brought two or three (or more) other manuscripts to that next-to-last draft stage. I also hope to have written 800,000 words. Oh, and a publishing contract would be nice. 



Well, that’s it, little coffee beans. What is your editing system? What are your writing plans for this year? Where do you hope to be by the end of 2016?

Wednesday, January 6, 2016

2016 // I Resolve

 
I realize this post is a little late, considering that normal people make and share their resolutions earlier on in the year (like, on day one). But since I am not a normal person, I have altered my schedule accordingly. So here you go, a list of my New Year’s resolutions (in no particular order):


I resolve to drink more coffee. Last year, I just, I don’t know, I don’t think I drank enough. Honestly, I didn’t quite put my heart and soul into it, and that needs to change. So, this year I plan to drink at least a small ocean’s worth of coffee.
 

I resolve to read more books. Admittedly, it’s been a long while since someone told me, “You read too much.” And I don’t think I have to tell you how unfortunate that is. Obviously, I’m not doing this right, and I need to try harder. I need to read until my brain is stuffed with words and lines of print start scrolling out my ears. Then, and only then, will I know that I have almost begun to read enough.

 
I resolve to learn more about the Black Death. Ever since I had to research the Bubonic Plague for a medieval history class, I’ve been obsessed with it. If you were to get me started, I could talk for hours about the physical and psychological effects of the disease, both on the individual and society as a whole. But I don’t think I would be able to teach a Ph.D. level course on it, and that needs to change. 

 
I resolve to eat more pizza. I really don’t think this point needs clarification.


I resolve to blog better. Lately I’ve been a little (translation: a lot) scatterbrained, and when you mix busyness with absentmindedness, it makes for an uncomfortable combination. Needless to say, I’d like to get ahead with blog writing so I’m not always scrambling last minute to finish my posts. Also, I have plenty of ideas, and I want to use them without stressing out and frying my brain.

 
I resolve to spend more time on other blogs. Seriously, I’ve been so bad at this for the past few months. (Really, I’ve been bad at it since day one, but if I just mention the past few months it makes me feel a little better about myself.) There are so many blogs out there, and so many posts I want to read and comment on, and this year I want to get better at doing that. Also, I don’t let myself answer comments on my blogs until I’ve commented on all the blogs I follow, which is why I’m often quite slow at getting back to you people. Oops.  


I resolve to become world-famous and super rich. Obviously, this means I will buy at least one Lamborghini, probably two (since I can’t decide if I want one in silver or lime green). I will buy so many books that the postal workers will build a new post office in my honor, funded by all the money that has been spent shipping book boxes to me. (WHY ARE YOU LAUGHING? That is totally a legitimate goal.) And I will also buy a thermos from the NaNoWriMo store because they’re super cool, and I’ve been wanting one since forever.


I resolve to become world ruler. Cait @ Paper Fury has her own plans for world domination, so this resolution may not be as straightforward as some of the others. But I’m confident we can come to a solution. Maybe I can rule most of the world and she can have New Zealand (because I like New Zealand, and I wouldn’t give it to just anyone).

 
I resolve to write words and then edit them. Again, this point doesn’t need explaining.

 
I resolve to become a New York Times Bestseller. Shhh, don’t tell me that’s not how it works. Just smile and nod, and I will give you coffee beans and call you my best friend.
 

I resolve to be more antisocial, more neurotic, and more morbid. Yep, this is the year for letting my true colors shine. Now go away.

 
Well, those are my resolutions, little coffee beans. What about you—what are your goals for 2016? When Cait and I battle for world domination, whose army will you join?  

Monday, January 4, 2016

Discussion: A SERIES OF UNFORTUNATE EVENTS // Books 10-12

Note: Over the past three Mondays, I’ve discussed the first nine books of A SERIES OF UNFORTUNATE EVENTS (the links are here, here, and here). Today I’ll be talking about the next three.
 
Warning: This will be a VERY SPOILERY discussion of A SERIES OF UNFORTUNATE EVENTS. VERY SPOILERY.
 


Hopefully, most of you have never been punched in the nose before. Some of you have (I’m sorry). But for those of you who haven’t, let me tell you what it’s like. Between the time when knuckle collides with cartilage and the time when the pain sinks in, there is a moment where you feel this strange numbness. During that moment your body tries to decide what it wants to do—if it will drop you, weak-kneed and half conscious, or if it will let you shake it off and fight back. Of course, you know something bad has happened, but it hasn’t sunk in yet. And, in the meantime, you don’t know exactly what you’re feeling. For the Baudelaire children, these three books are like that instant before the pain hits.

Violet, Klaus, and Sunny have been through so much, but they have always had each other. THE CARNIVEROUS CARNIVAL, though, ends with their traumatic separation—Sunny trapped in Count Olaf’s clutches, and Violet and Klaus hurtling down a mountain pass to their seemingly inevitable deaths. It feels like, from that moment till the moment THE PENULTIMATE PERIL ends, the world is just ringing from the force of a great blow while the Baudelaires wait for the full weight of the pain to start.

Loss of Innocence. In each installment of A SERIES OF UNFORTUNATE EVENTS, the children struggle against evil. But that struggle changes over time. At first, they only face external evils—the people who hurt them and the people who fail to help them—and those evils are easy to recognize. Yet as the series progresses, the categorization of evil and not-evil becomes harder. Though they have always considered themselves to be the good guys, they begin to notice a certain measure of evil in their own hearts. They discover how relatively easy it is to lie, to commit arson, and to do other morally reprehensible activities. Admittedly, they only do these things for a good cause. But they are also beginning to realize that a “good” justification doesn’t take away the guilt, or the wrong.

Now that they are entering premature adulthood, nothing is quite so black and white as it once was. People who are supposed to be noble don’t always do the right thing, and sometimes the villains surprise everyone with good deeds. Worse still, the children themselves do not know if they are more noble than villainous or if they are becoming just as bad as Count Olaf. They have fought so long and so hard, and they have survived so much, but life is finally taking its toll on them. They are becoming cynical and jaded.

The Triplets. Frank, Ernest, and Dewey physically represent the Baudelaires’ moral struggle. Frank and Dewey are good guys, while Ernest is bad, but the triplet are identical. Which means, try as they might, the Baudelaires can’t tell good and evil apart. Instead, they have to rely on their own judgment, and sometimes that judgment is flawed.

With the triplet quandary comes another hardship. Like in THE VILE VILLAGE (with Hector’s hot air balloon), the children are offered hope—hope for a good life, a way to escape all the evil around them and in them. Dewey wants to take them under his wing and see to it that all their needs are met, and for once, he doesn’t seem like the type to fail them. This time, though, the children are the ones to destroy this hope. Of all the awful things that have happened to them, this is the worst: they accidentally kill Dewey Denouement. And I’m not sure they ever figure out how to forgive themselves.

True, yes, Dewey’s death is not their fault, and if anyone is to be blamed, it should be Count Olaf. Count Olaf is the one who shoved the harpoon gun into the Baudelaire orphans hands without making sure they had a good grip on it before he let go. But no one ever tells the children that it’s not their fault they dropped the gun, it’s not their fault the gun fired when it hit the ground, and it’s definitely not their fault that the harpoon happened to kill Dewey. Regardless of how little they deserve the blame, they feel as if the fault is their own.

Failures. In THE PENULTIMATE PERIL, the children have to face almost everyone who has ever failed them since the time Mr. Poe sent them to live with Count Olaf. They run into Sir and Charles from THE MISERABLE MILL. They run into the teachers and headmaster from THE AUSTERE ACADEMY. They run into villagers from THE VILE VILLAGE. And they run into Jerome Squalor and Justice Strauss who apologize profusely for the way they have wronged the children, and who tell them just how much they want to help this time around. Once more, though, despite all their best intentions, Jerome and Justice Strauss fail the Baudelaires just as badly as before. It hurts more this time because Jerome and Justice Strauss really were trying and it still wasn’t enough. At the end of THE PENULTIMATE PERIL, it seems evident that no one will ever be able to save the Baudelaires, not from Count Olaf, not from misery, and certainly not from themselves.

The Hotel. The Hotel Denouement itself is a huge milestone in the Baudelaire children’s lives. Before now, they have always been fighting to find someplace safe to live, somewhere away from all the evil in this world. And they come to the hotel in hopes of protecting it—the last safe V.F.D location. Instead, they end up burning it to the ground. While this act of arson is necessary as a signal to V.F.D., and while the hotel had been compromised anyway, it is still significant. In a way, it is the physical communication of the one main, bitter thing the children have begun to realize over THE SLIPPERY SLOPE, THE GRIM GROTTO, and THE PENULTIMATE PERIL. For them, most of all, there is no place truly safe.

Even the most secure locations get compromised. Even the best people with the best intentions fail. They come to this hotel, and they find that every living person who has ever hurt them is staying there, as if to rub it in. And finally, it just cements their sinking suspicion that, not only will Olaf destroy their happiness and safety, but they will help him.
 

Okay, little coffee beans, that’s it for today. What are your thoughts? Have you read the series? Which book is your favorite?